Lord Rathbone sighed.
Why is it that my brothers get all the fun while I'm stuck here to watch?
Next time he'll use AXE.
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Sunday, February 13, 2011
Microfiction Monday!
Susan from Stony River has managed to rope me into her creative multi-blogged participation! Just write a short story in 140 characters or less (altogether). Keep your microwriting sharp! Go over and read the many fantastic entries once you're done here--you're more than welcome to join!
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19 comments:
Very good...a challenge
Wonderful!!! I loved this - and it made me go "awwwwwww poor Lord Rathbone!" :-) Take care
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Oh I really want to take part but I am not sure that I'll be able to write micro stories. :)
Old Spice might work better for him. Everyone loves Old Spice.
That's good!
That's awesome. And witty. It made me laugh this time. I need to check it out.
Nahno ∗ McLein ™
well done! micro fiction isn't an easy thing to do :)
Poor Lord Rathbone. He should put his foot down and demand they take turns keeping watch. I wouldn't recommend an axe, though.
The poor man. And on Valentine's Day, too. It breaks my heart. *perk* Perhaps I'll console him.
Great job.
Musk he must try....if he wants to steal his brothers bride....loved it.
Poor Rathborn, maybe a complete fragrance change would help.
Good MF, I lol at the end!
Great chuckle for the morning! Poor guy!! You never know, even a little change might make a difference! Have a great week!
Sylvia
All about smelling good for the ladies ;-)
I love it, Elizabeth
Hahaha - a micro-commercial!
Well, it just might have helped. LOL!
Loved the subtle reference to a commercial...hate the commercial, but love your story...Cheers~
Hmm...maybe he needs to set his sights higher than Axe. LOL At least he's giving the situation some thought! :)
Hahaha..
Poor Lord Rathbone if he expects Axe to turn him into a confident and girl-getting machine in seconds.
Hahaha i love it! At first I thought 'AXE' referred to the sharp cutting tool...
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