Sunday, February 13, 2011

Microfiction Monday!

Susan from Stony River has managed to rope me into her creative multi-blogged participation! Just write a short story in 140 characters or less (altogether). Keep your microwriting sharp! Go over and read the many fantastic entries once you're done here--you're more than welcome to join!





Lord Rathbone sighed.

Why is it that my brothers get all the fun while I'm stuck here to watch?

Next time he'll use AXE.


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19 comments:

  1. GailFebruary 13, 2011 at 3:10 AM

    Very good...a challenge

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  2. Old KittyFebruary 13, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    Wonderful!!! I loved this - and it made me go "awwwwwww poor Lord Rathbone!" :-) Take care
    x

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  3. ShariFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:07 AM

    Oh I really want to take part but I am not sure that I'll be able to write micro stories. :)

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  4. KTFebruary 13, 2011 at 10:01 AM

    Old Spice might work better for him. Everyone loves Old Spice.

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  5. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 13, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    That's good!

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  6. UnknownFebruary 13, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    That's awesome. And witty. It made me laugh this time. I need to check it out.
    Nahno ∗ McLein ™

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  7. Lynda R Young as Elle CardyFebruary 13, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    well done! micro fiction isn't an easy thing to do :)

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  8. PatFebruary 13, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Poor Lord Rathbone. He should put his foot down and demand they take turns keeping watch. I wouldn't recommend an axe, though.

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  9. Melanie ShermanFebruary 13, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    The poor man. And on Valentine's Day, too. It breaks my heart. *perk* Perhaps I'll console him.

    Great job.

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  10. UnknownFebruary 14, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    Musk he must try....if he wants to steal his brothers bride....loved it.

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  11. PeggyFebruary 14, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    Poor Rathborn, maybe a complete fragrance change would help.
    Good MF, I lol at the end!

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  12. Sylvia KFebruary 14, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    Great chuckle for the morning! Poor guy!! You never know, even a little change might make a difference! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  13. AnyesFebruary 14, 2011 at 2:13 PM

    All about smelling good for the ladies ;-)

    I love it, Elizabeth

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  14. Other MaryFebruary 14, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    Hahaha - a micro-commercial!

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  15. Susan FobesFebruary 14, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    Well, it just might have helped. LOL!

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    Loved the subtle reference to a commercial...hate the commercial, but love your story...Cheers~

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  17. Lisa Ricard ClaroFebruary 14, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    Hmm...maybe he needs to set his sights higher than Axe. LOL At least he's giving the situation some thought! :)

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  18. indicaspeciesFebruary 15, 2011 at 1:54 AM

    Hahaha..
    Poor Lord Rathbone if he expects Axe to turn him into a confident and girl-getting machine in seconds.

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    Hahaha i love it! At first I thought 'AXE' referred to the sharp cutting tool...

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