Sunday, January 30, 2011

Microfiction Monday!

Susan's wonderful Microfiction Monday is here--it's fun, please visit her blog and read everyone's entries for the day! You're more than welcome to hope the train if you're up to it. :)

The challenge is to write a story in 140 characters or less. Ready?

Here we GO!



"Laddie! We be shipwrecked on this blasted isle--this is all ye could fish out?"

"Aye, Capn cleanliness is nextu godliness, dontcha know."


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28 comments:

  1. Sylvia KJanuary 30, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    Fun take for the day! You gotta love pirates who think well of cleanliness!!! Love it! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. Other MaryJanuary 30, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    That's a fun one. Love the dialog!

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  3. Kay L. DaviesJanuary 30, 2011 at 6:05 PM

    Wonderful, dontcha know!
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  4. PeggyJanuary 30, 2011 at 6:13 PM

    Good fish tale, dontcha know.
    HAHAHAHAHA

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  5. PatJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    The "real you" comes out in a crisis! Thanks for the laugh, Elizabeth!

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  6. Susan FobesJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    I had that very same thought but went a slightly different direction. Good one!

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  7. DianeJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    Cute one and great shortening skills there. :O)

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  8. Lisa Ricard ClaroJanuary 30, 2011 at 9:33 PM

    The cap'n will fast learn if he wants something done right he'll have to do it himself. LOL

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  9. AnyesJanuary 31, 2011 at 12:55 AM

    I guess this week is about about getting cleaned up ;-)

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  10. Old KittyJanuary 31, 2011 at 3:32 AM

    LOL!!!!! Wise words!!!! Excellent! Yay! Take care
    x

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  11. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.ukJanuary 31, 2011 at 3:47 AM

    OOh Ar, they'd be right there! LOL! :O)

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  12. izzyJanuary 31, 2011 at 5:37 AM

    They can float to heaven! good one, thanks.

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  13. DianneJanuary 31, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    well done :)

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  14. septembermomJanuary 31, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    Great dialogue!! Terrific :)

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  15. Grandma's GoulashJanuary 31, 2011 at 2:20 PM

    Ah, but what is starvation next to? Sure hope there's some coconut trees on that island. :)

    Hope you'll stop by: Bad Fit

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    Love the character speech! Fun one this week. Cheers~

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  17. MargaretJanuary 31, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    Gotta love the positive thinking! :)

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  18. faithJanuary 31, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    This is all you could fish out! Good one! :)

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  19. JimJanuary 31, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    Perhaps he should let his Capt'n fish tomorrow. Most any catch should be better than this.
    :)
    Very nice µ-fiction story, Elizabeth.
    ..

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  20. Michael G-GJanuary 31, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    Those two are fast becoming my favorite philosophers!

    Nice job, Elizabeth. Have a great week.

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  21. PoochJanuary 31, 2011 at 11:32 PM

    Very fresh idea, philosophic fishermen. I like your wording on this!
    :)

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  22. AkelamaluFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:22 AM

    Cleanliness may be important but food would have been more welcome I'm sure. ;)

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  23. jabblogFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:57 AM

    Now there's a well-brought-up sailor ;-)

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  24. Ms.DaisyFebruary 1, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    Elizabeth,
    This was one of the first thoughts that crossed my mind when I first saw this week's pic...but then went in a totally different direction! Loved your dialog...and cleanliness is good but a full tummy is better!

    ~Jean

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  25. MariaFebruary 2, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    Good MM. Liked it!

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  26. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:35 AM

    Indeed! LOL.

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  27. ruthiFebruary 3, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    That's a good one. hahaha

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  28. JillienFebruary 3, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    I'm sure if they get hungry enough......

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